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[Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Bomber/Wall/Whatever

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:12 am
by Jayeon
The D.E.S.U. bomber's design.

Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:23 am
by Ex-Rumia
That's a great um... Wall you have there.

Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:28 am
by ShadowHunter
so your gonna battle a wall

WRONG

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:37 am
by Jayeon
It's not a wall, It's a bomber faces the opposite direction of the fighter attacking it. You know, like the Black Heart from Battle Garrega?

Mmph.

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:43 am
by Jayeon
That's true. My designs will look like s*** until I figure out how to make s*** look cooler.

Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 1:45 am
by ShadowHunter
try making your designs alot more complex and avoid repeating parts, repeating parts will result in walls

"Nazgul's Revenge" Attack

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:00 am
by Jayeon
Ok, enough with the Design problems. It may look like a wall, but I'll try to avoid that stuff in the future.

Anyways, I decided to import an attack from my [HELL LABEL] Version of the Nazgul Model X Beta. I decided to call it "Nazgul's Revenge".

I know recycling attacks from old bosses is a bad idea, but this is only one of the attacks. Stay tuned for more. I'm no expert Fraxian.

Image

Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:04 am
by AlexMdle
Ok, on the pattern design then. Try making an attack more complex than "bullet parts on rotating panel" before you decide that it deserves a name.

One of the biggest problems I have with your bosses is the pure undulated laziness that permeates them. You do not attempt to use diverse weapons, you do not attempt to add any structure to the fight, or even give the boss any movement.

I understand if you don't know how to, but that's no excuse for not trying.

I has issues.

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 2:21 am
by Jayeon
I'm trying to improve:
My attack ideas.
My movement. (I'm starting to add movement to my bosses, including this one)
My HP decisions.
Until I can get some ideas into this boss and actually start thinking HARD, these are the only previews of this boss you will get.

Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

Posted: Tue Jun 11, 2013 6:57 am
by Garoslaw
USE SOMETHING ELSE THAN WINGS