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SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 6:11 pm
by dracmeister
Taken directly from my F**** Forum Thread...

Though I'm not going to write the actual first events.

This first post will serve as a Description.

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SKY STREAKS

Sky Streaks is a new story that I'm writing, it talks about the war and conflicts in the modern Cutezome Era, with some unveiling writing about the the Great Inter-Government War of the Cutezomes, and maybe a side-serving of interpersonal development of the main characters.. So this, adds to the Cutezome Lore but more on military topics.
This story also features characters from Other Stories I wrote, just to make a statement that everything is inter-connected. But, don't worry, MINIMAL In-Universe Jokes/Gags/Lingo are applied here.

Season 1 - The Noirelcam Arc
Set on the Cutezome Year 2024 onwards, the story goes on about the Noirelcam Arc and its motives of Universal Dominance.
Though they have quite a hatred of the Cutezomes. Generation by generation, Invasion after invasion, the Cutezomes were always there with guards ready and seemingly advanced technology.

One day, August 13, the Noirelcam Arc invaded Planet Cutezome. It is NOT the first time Planet Cutezome was invaded by the Noirelcam Arc, there were several failed attempts before, but this felt different. There are claims that Noirelcam drones are materializing inside cities and attacking the citizens. The Attacks got to the Army and the Cutezome High-Command issues the "Ghost Town" Law, where NO CIVILIAN is allowed to roam around the normal cities and everyone has to stay in Top Secret Duplicate Cities.

Soon, every city was like Ghost Town. Noirelcam Drones roamed around cities. Only the Military was allowed to scour around cities.

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Okay. I sorta stopped writing there.
But I do have an idea what happens next but I need to think how to connect it to this story.

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2012 2:52 am
by [][][][]
Somehow, the subtitle doesn't make sense.
Anyways, standard infiltration/cloak assault stuff...
Nice counter by military...
But it can be defused with all-out in-oh wait
Okay. They can't; they'll be blasted out within minutes.
I'm guessing that there are too many Drones there for Cutezome military to handle and/or they struck fast, hard, and undetectable enough to catch military by surprise and escape unharmed; otherwise this story would end even before it begun, and it'd make no sense why it even started.
Anyways, waiting...

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2012 11:50 am
by dracmeister
Argh! Hey there! I've gotten around possible events to connect the next part of the story.

Date Code 08242024
Episode 1A: Pleasant Horizons

Eleven days had past since the Noirelcam's sudden invasion. The World is silent. The only noises will be from the incoming counter-attack.

Location: Cutezome Aircraft Carrier "Strikefire"

A pilot in red is running through inside the decks, it appears to be a woman with long blue flowing hair. She gets to the hangar, climbs up to a ship with the call tag, "Red Lightning," she closes the cockpit door.

Woman Pilot in red: I'm ready for some action, pull up those doors!
Opereta: I'm sorry. We have to wait for Mr. Gane for you to do this first strike with you, Ms. Shinedrop.
Shinedrop: I don't need that perfectionist prick, just pull up those doors!
Opereta: I'm sorry I can't do it-
Shinedrop: Listen here, little girl! I'm not afraid to shoot ballistic rounds on those doors! Unless YOU DON'T WANT TO CLEAN the mess up, you'd better open those doors!
Opereta: Uhhh... Don't! I'll get in trouble, fine I'll open the doors.

As the Aircraft Carrier opens its launch doors, somewhat an enemy scout sees that the Aircraft Carrier is shifting to attack protocols. The Aircraft Carrier's radar detects the scout because it flew close the radar's range. The Control Tower Alerts one of the Turret Operators, to deploy and take out the scout.

Control Tower Dude: Ey Mike. Uhmm... There's a Buzzer just around your sight range. Can you take it out?
Mike the Turret Operator: On it. *takes aim*
Mike the Turret Operator: Locked. Turret AI taking over.
Mike the Turret Operator: Fire!

The Scout was blown out of the air.

Mike the Turret Operator: Booyeah! Oh wait. What is that?
Control Tower Dude: Oh crap! That Scout was projecting a Cloaking Field to hide it's reinforcements!
Control Tower Dude: I'm reading 6, 12, 18... Oh crap!

The Control Tower flicked the Alarm getting ready for Full Attack Protocols.

[EMERGENCY! EMERGENCY! ENEMY IN OUR SIGHTS! ALL COMBAT PERSONNEL ON HIGH ALERT! THIS IS NOT A DRILL!]

At the Hangar...

Shinedrop: Well, whaddaya know. Just in time. I'm launching off without that prick. Engage!

The Red Lightning Launches of the Carrier.

Shinedrop: This is the Red Lightning code series VX-241, commencing attack on enemies!
Opereta: *sigh* This is mission control. Acknowledged.
Opereta: There six of the assailants right in front of you!
Shinedrop: I can see that! *minigun* *explosions*
Opereta: Four on your six!

Shinedrop does a flip over the enemies.

*minigun* *explosions*

Opereta: There's a cluster on your 2 o'clock.

Shinedrop flies around the cluster.

*ballistic rounds* *explosions*

Shinedrop: Yeeehaw! I'm ownin' these fools!
Opereta: Oh no! That was a diversion! On your 7! *enemy minigun*
Shinedrop: Oh crab!

Shinedrop does a steep 360.

Shinedrop: Eat lead, you freaks!

*an energy is charging from behind*

Opereta: An Energy Beam behind you!

*Energy Beam* *explosions*

Shinedrop: Woah!
Gane: What? You couldn't you start the party with me?
Shinedrop: You could have killed me!
Opereta: Uhm. Guys. We're not done here! No time to argue.
Gane: Right on, isn't that TRUE, Shinee? *minigun* *explosions*
Opereta: High Caliber mooks up ahead.
Gane: I'm on them!

Gane does a sweeping tactic.

*explosions*

Opereta: This unit is different it has armor that can repel Small Arms!
Gane: I've got just what it needs. *Skewer Missiles*
*explosions*

Opereta: Okay guys. I think that does just about it. Return to the Carrier.
Shinedrop: I'm picking up a signal on a higher altitude. Could it be?!
Opereta: Scanning!
Opereta: I couldn't identify it! It must be a new Noirelcam unit!

The Unknown Aircraft starts shooting its turrets.

Shinedrop: I'm going to engage on it!
Gane: Typical, Shinee~ never thinks before she acts.
Shinedrop: I don't need you to babysit me on every mission.

Shinedrop launches a barrage of Ballistic Rounds.
It does a certain amount of damage.

Shinedrop: That explosion looks good. But it's still standing?
Gane: Stand back, I don't want you getting sick after this attack. *Launches Corrosive Material Missiles*
*explosions*
*burning sounds*

Gane: Impossible! It's still standing even its damaged like that.
Shinedrop: I think I got an idea. Opereta, is this thing Mechanical?
Opereta: As far as I've scanned it, yes.
Shinedrop: Here goes. Gane, I want you to use you boosters on me to serve as the inertial force in case my ship power fails.
Gane: You're not thinking.
Shinedrop: C'mon, I wanna try this out.
Gane: Fine.
Opereta: Guys, the Strikefire is taking damage.
Shinedrop: In positions. Here goes.

*energy surging in and through the Red Lightning*
*the creases of the ship begin to glow*
*it's glowing hot*

Shinedrop: FIRING WAVE BEAM CANNON!

A Wave of Energy heads towards the ship. *hit* *dissolve*

Shinedrop: Did that do it?

*silence*

A huge electronic spheroid appeared followed by a large explosion spawns at the enemy ship.
The Unknown craft plummets down the sea.

Shinedrop: I'm losing altitude. I can't use my engines.

Gane flies below Shinedrop and give a blast off from his booster.
The push of the booster makes Shinedrop bump her head. Knocking her unconscious.

Gane: Everyone on Deck! Stabilize and Burn the fire out as soon as she lands!

The Red Lightning was caught by the Strikefire's Landing pad. They rushed Shinedrop to the infirmary.

9 hours later.

Gane: Oh she's coming.
Gane: Do I REALLY need to look out for you? This is getting a bit old.
Shinedrop: Huh?! Ugh *lays back down*
Gane: Don't hurt yourself like that. As far as I know, I'm still your superior. And It's my responsibility to look out for my men.
Don't make me worry like that again.

A familiar nurse comes by.

Nurse: How's she doing?
Gane: She's fine.
Nurse: That's a cold tone there, doctor.
Gane: Please. Don't.
Nurse: Alright then.

Gane leaves.

Shinedrop: Heh heh. I know that's you, Precious.
Precious: Awww... How'd you know?
Shinedrop: Your body.
Precious: Ehee hee hee... Uhm... So? What is it this time?
Shinedrop: A bump on the head.

Meanwhile, at the wreckage of the Unknown Ship. A Black Space Fighter Exits out of one the pods and launches off the sea grave and into the sky...

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2012 4:04 pm
by dracmeister
This first post will serve as a Description.
So. It only applies to the first post.

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:27 am
by [][][][]
Pretty much.
All the exposition about the non-spoiler should be at the front.
Also, is this a novel or what?

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:54 am
by ShadowSpectre
To be fair, he didn't mention whether or not it would be a novel. Mind you, a script is child's play.

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:43 am
by [][][][]
Well, it says it's a story...
But I agree nonetheless; he didn't say what kind of story it is.

Personal preference wants a novel, though. Verbose is my style.

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 6:11 pm
by Garoslaw
The title will forever be disturbing.

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 9:44 pm
by Armored Entity
Garoslaw wrote:The title will forever be disturbing.
What is disturbing about the Title? I see nothing wrong with it.

Re: SKY STREAKS! ~ All is fair in Love and War

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 10:16 pm
by ShadowSpectre
Armored Entity wrote:What is disturbing about the Title? I see nothing wrong with it.
exactly