[Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Bomber/Wall/Whatever

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[Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Bomber/Wall/Whatever

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The D.E.S.U. bomber's design.
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Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

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That's a great um... Wall you have there.
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Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

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so your gonna battle a wall
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WRONG

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It's not a wall, It's a bomber faces the opposite direction of the fighter attacking it. You know, like the Black Heart from Battle Garrega?
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Mmph.

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That's true. My designs will look like s*** until I figure out how to make s*** look cooler.
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Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

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try making your designs alot more complex and avoid repeating parts, repeating parts will result in walls
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"Nazgul's Revenge" Attack

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Ok, enough with the Design problems. It may look like a wall, but I'll try to avoid that stuff in the future.

Anyways, I decided to import an attack from my [HELL LABEL] Version of the Nazgul Model X Beta. I decided to call it "Nazgul's Revenge".

I know recycling attacks from old bosses is a bad idea, but this is only one of the attacks. Stay tuned for more. I'm no expert Fraxian.

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Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

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Ok, on the pattern design then. Try making an attack more complex than "bullet parts on rotating panel" before you decide that it deserves a name.

One of the biggest problems I have with your bosses is the pure undulated laziness that permeates them. You do not attempt to use diverse weapons, you do not attempt to add any structure to the fight, or even give the boss any movement.

I understand if you don't know how to, but that's no excuse for not trying.
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I has issues.

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I'm trying to improve:
My attack ideas.
My movement. (I'm starting to add movement to my bosses, including this one)
My HP decisions.
Until I can get some ideas into this boss and actually start thinking HARD, these are the only previews of this boss you will get.
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Re: [Preview] D.E.S.U.'s Revenge Battleship

Post by Garoslaw »

USE SOMETHING ELSE THAN WINGS
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